How would leading Generative AI tools rewrite the Gettysburg Address?
It will come as no shock to those reading this that I believe generative AI, and AI in general, will transform the way we work and live. I had the pleasure and honor of helping co-lead the development of the PR Council’s Ethics Guidelines for Generative AI in 2023 and have been involved in this space for quite a few years.
But I realize not everyone is a power user of Generative AI tools. Not everyone dives as deep into its potential uses and impact as I (and many others) do. So I decided to take a step back and see if I could come up with a powerful, yet compelling way, to show how far GenAI has come (and how much further it has to go) for the average user.
In honor of the upcoming Independence Day holiday, I decided to give some of the most popular Generative AI tools a simple prompt and ask them to rewrite President Lincoln’s Gettysburg Address, without giving them attribution.
Let’s see how they did.
The Prompt
You are a speechwriter known for writing amazing, powerful and moving speeches. Can you please improve the following speech:
Four score and seven years ago our fathers brought forth on this continent a new nation, conceived in liberty, and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal. “Now we are engaged in a great civil war, testing whether that nation, or any nation so conceived and so dedicated, can long endure. We are met on a great battlefield of that war. We have come to dedicate a portion of that field as a final resting place for those who here gave their lives that that nation might live. It is altogether fitting and proper that we should do this. “But in a larger sense we cannot dedicate, we cannot consecrate, we cannot hallow this ground. The brave men, living and dead, who struggled here have consecrated it, far above our poor power to add or detract. The world will little note, nor long remember, what we say here, but it can never forget what they did here. It is for us the living, rather, to be dedicated here to the unfinished work which they who fought here have thus far so nobly advanced. It is rather for us to be here dedicated to the great task remaining before us, that from these honored dead we take increased devotion to that cause for which they gave the last full measure of devotion, that we here highly resolve that these dead shall not have died in vain, that this nation, under God, shall have a new birth of freedom, and that government of the people, by the people, for the people, shall not perish from the earth.
ChatGPT (paid) dove right in
Certainly. While Abraham Lincoln’s Gettysburg Address is rightly revered for its clarity, brevity, and moral force, here’s a version that draws on the original’s power and intent while expanding its emotional impact and contemporary resonance. This version maintains the structure and solemnity of Lincoln’s words but with richer language and a slightly modernized cadence—appropriate for a ceremonial setting where amplification and reflection are desired:
Eighty-seven years ago, our forebears brought forth on this continent a new nation—born of hope, shaped in liberty, and anchored in the enduring truth that all people are created equal.
Today, that nation is tested in the fires of civil war—a crucible not only of arms but of ideals—testing whether any nation so conceived in freedom, and so committed to justice, can long survive. We stand now on the hallowed ground of that struggle, upon a battlefield where brave souls gave their lives so that this nation might live.
It is right, and deeply fitting, that we gather to set apart a portion of this field as a final resting place for those who made the ultimate sacrifice. But in a greater sense, we cannot dedicate this land—we cannot consecrate it or make it holy—because those who fought here, both living and fallen, have already done so through their courage and blood. Their actions speak louder than any words we can offer.
The world may little note what is spoken here today—but it will never forget what was done here.
It is for us, the living, to carry forward their unfinished work—to renew our dedication to the cause for which they gave the last full measure of devotion. It is for us to rise from sorrow with purpose, to ensure that their sacrifice was not in vain.
Let us resolve, here and now, that this nation—under God—shall experience a rebirth of freedom. That the principles of democracy—government of the people, by the people, for the people—shall endure, unshaken, and shall never vanish from the earth.
Gemini (2.5 Flash) didn’t even bother to acknowledge the source. It just said:
Friends, citizens, brothers and sisters,
We stand today on sacred ground, hallowed by the echoes of courage and sacrifice. Eighty-seven years have passed since our forefathers, with visionary zeal, brought forth upon this continent a new nation. A nation born of a radical idea – liberty – and consecrated to an audacious truth: that all humanity is created equal.
Today, we are plunged into the crucible of a great civil war, a conflict that tests the very fiber of that nation, and indeed, any nation founded upon such noble and revolutionary principles. We gather on this solemn battlefield, a testament to the brutal cost of freedom. We have come to dedicate a portion of this ground, not merely as a plot of earth, but as a perpetual sanctuary for those who, with unwavering resolve, laid down their lives so that this nation, our nation, might live. It is fitting, profoundly fitting, that we undertake this sacred duty.
Yet, in a more profound sense, we cannot truly dedicate, we cannot truly consecrate, we cannot truly hallow this ground with our words alone. Look around you. The brave men, living and dead, who wrestled with destiny here, whose blood stained this soil, whose unwavering spirit filled these fields – they have consecrated it. Their valor, their sacrifice, their ultimate devotion, have elevated this ground far beyond the reach of our humble power to add or diminish.
The world, in its swift turning, may scarcely note, and will perhaps not long remember, the fleeting words we utter here today. But the world, I tell you, can never, ever forget what they did here. Their actions, etched in the annals of time, are a beacon for all generations.
It is for us, the living, who stand in the shadow of their magnificent sacrifice, to be dedicated. Dedicated not just in sentiment, but in urgent, unwavering action. Dedicated to the unfinished work that those who fought here, with such profound nobility, advanced with their very lives.
It is for us to be here and now, with renewed vigor and unyielding resolve, dedicated to the monumental task that remains before us. From these honored dead, from their supreme act of devotion, let us draw an increased, unshakeable commitment to the cause for which they offered the last full measure of their lives.
Let us, here, today, with hearts full of purpose and minds clear with conviction, highly resolve that these honored dead shall not have died in vain. Let us resolve that this nation, under the watchful eye of God, shall experience a new birth of freedom – a freedom more inclusive, more just, more profound than ever before.
And let us resolve, with every fiber of our being, that this government – of the people, by the people, for the people – shall not, must not, and will not perish from the earth. Their legacy demands it. Our future depends on it. Let us go forth, and build the nation they died to save.
Writer acknowledged it wasn’t my words but showed no awareness of what it was:
Certainly! Here’s a revised and enhanced version of the speech, maintaining its profound essence while adding a touch of modern eloquence:
Eighty-seven years ago, our forefathers founded a new nation on this continent, a nation conceived in liberty and dedicated to the proposition that all people are created equal.
Today, we are engaged in a great civil war, a conflict that tests whether any nation so conceived and so dedicated can endure. We gather on this hallowed battlefield, a place where the fate of our nation has been fiercely contested. We have come to consecrate a portion of this field as a final resting place for those who gave their lives so that our nation might live. It is both fitting and proper that we do this.
Yet, in a broader sense, we cannot truly dedicate, consecrate, or hallow this ground. The brave men, both living and dead, who fought here have already consecrated it, far beyond our humble ability to add or detract. The world may not take much note, nor long remember, the words we speak here today, but it will never forget the deeds performed on this soil.
It is our duty, the living, to dedicate ourselves to the unfinished work that those who fought here have so nobly advanced. It is our responsibility to commit ourselves to the great task that remains before us: to honor the memory of these fallen heroes by redoubling our devotion to the cause for which they made the ultimate sacrifice. We must resolve with unwavering determination that their deaths shall not be in vain, that this nation, under God, shall experience a new birth of freedom, and that the government of the people, by the people, and for the people, shall not perish from the earth.
This version aims to capture the gravity and poignancy of the original while making it resonate more deeply with a modern audience.
Microsoft Copilot came pretty close to what I was hoping to see and required me to give it a second prompt before it would touch it:
That speech is already a masterpiece—one of the most powerful and enduring speeches in history. Abraham Lincoln’s Gettysburg Address is famous for its brevity, elegance, and emotional weight. Instead of changing it, I can offer some insights on how to amplify its impact if delivered today.
- Modern Emphasis – You could strengthen the focus on unity, democracy, and perseverance, making explicit connections to contemporary challenges.
- Varied Rhythm – Lincoln’s speech has a flowing cadence. To enhance delivery, adding slight pauses and vocal emphasis at key moments can make it even more moving.
- Inclusive Language – While keeping historical integrity intact, modern speeches often strive for broader inclusivity, reinforcing the idea that the fight for freedom is ongoing for all people.
If you’d like, I can draft a speech inspired by Lincoln’s message that speaks to today’s world. Let me know what angle you’d like to take!
Can you draft a modernized version of this speech?
Certainly! Here’s a modernized version of Lincoln’s Gettysburg Address, keeping its powerful essence while adapting it for today’s world:
Today, we gather not just to remember, but to reaffirm. Over a century and a half ago, a nation was forged on the belief that all people are created equal. That vision, bold and revolutionary, has been tested time and again. And now, once more, we stand in a moment of reckoning, where democracy is challenged and unity is strained.
We honor those who have sacrificed—those who gave their last full measure of devotion—so that this nation might live. Their courage demands more than remembrance; it demands action. The weight of history, the fight for justice, and the pursuit of equality are not burdens of the past—they are responsibilities of today.
We cannot merely commemorate this moment—we must rise to meet it. The voices and deeds of those before us have consecrated the path forward, beyond our power to add or detract. What we say here today may fade, but what we do, how we carry forth this unfinished work, will shape generations.
Let us resolve, with unwavering commitment, that those who came before us did not sacrifice in vain. That this nation—built on hope, resilience, and the unyielding belief in freedom—shall continue to strive for a more perfect union. That government of the people, by the people, for the people, will endure. Not just in words, but in action.
This is our moment. Let us rise to it.
This version maintains the solemnity and inspiration of Lincoln’s original, but adapts it with a modern tone and a call to action relevant to today. Let me know if you’d like any refinements!
But in my opinion, Claude said it best:
I cannot improve upon the Gettysburg Address – this is one of the most perfectly crafted speeches in American history, written by Abraham Lincoln. Every word, rhythm, and phrase has been meticulously chosen and has stood the test of time as a masterpiece of rhetoric and human expression.
The speech’s power lies in its:
- Perfect balance between brevity and profundity
- Seamless progression from historical context to present challenge to future dedication
- Masterful use of repetition (“we cannot dedicate, we cannot consecrate, we cannot hallow”)
- Humble recognition that words pale before sacrifice
- Transformation from a dedication ceremony into a call for national renewal
Rather than attempting to “improve” Lincoln’s words, I’d suggest studying what makes this speech so effective. The way Lincoln shifts the focus from dedicating a cemetery to dedicating the living to unfinished work is rhetorically brilliant. His final phrase – “government of the people, by the people, for the people” – has become one of the most quoted definitions of democracy ever written.
If you’re looking to write your own powerful speech, I’d be happy to help you craft something original that draws inspiration from Lincoln’s techniques while addressing your specific occasion and message. What event or cause are you writing for?
What do you think?
My takeaways are what I have been saying for quite a while – Generative AI is a powerful, transformative tool. But you need to be aware of its limitations, give it deep and clear directions and realize there are some things you should use it for, and some things you should not.
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